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mentos_007

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So here's my rebuilt portfolio: www.mentos.lnet.szn.pl/blekitna
I know the adress is a bit too long but I'm waiting for a better one... soon...

What do you think about my site/design/photos?
Is English version ok? Does something sound iffy or it's fine??
 
Grammatical corrections are bolded

mentos_007 said:
Photographs are always better if you can share them with others. Whenever you show your picture to somebody else, and they appreciate your work, that means that you are making progress, and progress is [always?] unfinished. We develop our own styles through ages, through thousands of pictures taken, rolls of film wasted, or digital files deleted.

If you want me to share my photographs with you, just contact me. I do the photoshoots outdors, I can sell you the prints so you may redecorate your apartment or office. Just e-mail me.

I wasn't sure if "always" was the appropriate word in "and progress is unfinished." I think it fits the statement well, but it is subjective.

I would rewrite the last paragraph a little bit more like this:

If you would like to share my photography experience with you, please feel free to contact me. I can offer the prints at a very reasonable price to compliment your apartment or office decor.
 
thank you a lot! Well.. with this progress part, it is rather a philosofical question... :)
 

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