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SpeedTrap

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Here is one shot last night of my wife, Let me know what you think.
Any CC is always welcome
PS This was shot with my new D300

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Thanks for looking.
 

RowmyF

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I like it.

Reminds me of a Dove commercial and her eyes are really nice.
 

JerryPH

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Nice indeed!

I am just finding that nice shadow on her shoulders lightly distracting (separation lighting would address that) and I feel it is very lightly overexposed (maybe a 1/3 or 1/2 stop). The hair is cut off on the left a little.

I'm really nit-picking becuase there is not much else to critique. This is a really nice pic.
 

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Great shot but the eyes still need work to bring out the colour and take out the red.

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It's beautiful! I'm just missing a little definition of the chin. Without it, you lose some of the 3-dimensional feel. Your wife is gorgeous! Let's see more! :)
 

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