New rendition from a test shoot today C&C please

[rockangelphotography]

One of my models and I went to scope out the location for our shoot on Friday and I was just doing some test shots and thought I would try some PP, Let me know what you think!




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[impressme]

I like the concept but i think in this test the clouds are overdone. I notice that you're using to diff styles of clouds (not sure the diff names of the types of clouds there are). I think I would prefer to see either one or the other. I like the sharper style but again like the other photo you posted, the edges of the clouds need a bit of softening. See the edit i did on your other photo. (I hope this makes sense)