New Session!

[The Phototron]

I was actually planning to do some outdoor shots, but it was pouring rain. So plan changed!

1.

2. (Her feet wasn't in the frame during the shot, so I have to crop heavily, doh!)

3.

Don't tell me to change her expression!

4.

5.

6. (Not so sure about this one)

She's great at posing, I didn't have to do much in that area.

Comments and critiques are welcome as usual!

 

[Sideburns]

lines from her pants are distracting...and looks like a dark line right above the pants as well...other than that I like em.

 

[IndieMe]

I like 5 the best. :thumbup:

 

[Puscas]

lines from her pants are distracting...and looks like a dark line right above the pants as well...other than that I like em.

yep, my thoughts too..




pascal

 

[The Phototron]

lines from her pants are distracting...and looks like a dark line right above the pants as well...other than that I like em.

Thanks for the comment.

That's just the way her pants look like.

I like 5 the best. :thumbup:

Thanks!

yep, my thoughts too..

Thanks for the comment!

 

[Ronman]

More good shots, Phototron. Your model has a very expressive face. I could put #3 on MY desk. I like #5 also. ron

 

[spiffybeth]

i dont like the back lighting on number 4 because some of her hair is blown out and some of it isnt.

nice shoot overall!

 

[The Phototron]

i dont like the back lighting on number 4 because some of her hair is blown out and some of it isnt.

nice shoot overall!

Thanks!

I agree on the hair light, I wanted to discard it but I like the pose.

I'm looking for more people to shoot, anyone live around NYC area?!

 

[Viperjet]

Change her expression.

Just kidding...

Yeh, having her shirt pulled up is too distracting.

 

[spiffybeth]

Thanks!

I agree on the hair light, I wanted to discard it but I like the pose.

I'm looking for more people to shoot, anyone live around NYC area?!

you're in NYC?

 

[The Phototron]

Change her expression.

Just kidding...

Yeh, having her shirt pulled up is too distracting.

I wouldn't dare asking her to do that!

you're in NYC?

Yep, you too?

 

[Sideburns]

Thanks for the comment.

That's just the way her pants look like.

Thanks!

Thanks for the comment!

I meant on her skin FROM her pants. Do you see what I mean? Like..on her stomach.

 

[The Phototron]

I meant on her skin FROM her pants. Do you see what I mean? Like..on her stomach.

Oh, I see. Yeah I will work on that. Thanks for the heads up.

 

[spiffybeth]

Yep, you too?

across the river in central jersey.

 

[The Phototron]

More good shots, Phototron. Your model has a very expressive face. I could put #3 on MY desk. I like #5 also. ron

Thanks! I'm not sure if she'd be happy about that.

across the river in central jersey.

Damn, I have to cross the river!?