New work with New Equipment :D

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I finally got a chance to upgrade my equipment with a very sweet 5dmkii and some other stuff, and I really wanted to share with you my first job with my new baby :D
Please leave me your comment and hope you enjoy my work.
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I think these aren't bad, BUT I would really lose the cheesy, sans-serif text. That's the real detractor here!
 
I think these aren't bad, BUT I would really lose the cheesy, sans-serif text. That's the real detractor here!
Agreed. It doesn't fit or support the theme of the rest of the composition it's a part of.

I think the photos themselves are terrific, as is the composite and effects work.
 
Sorry, I think everything about them is cheesy. Questionable facial expressions in 1-2, the font is horrible, backgrounds look like 1st year Photoshop stuff.
 
Sorry, I think everything about them is cheesy. Questionable facial expressions in 1-2, the font is horrible, backgrounds look like 1st year Photoshop stuff.

I agree with the expression in number 2 :(
The font is the common font for comic books ( that is what i wanted to recreate) Backgrounds ( it is my first year ) Thank you
 
Sorry, I think everything about them is cheesy. Questionable facial expressions in 1-2, the font is horrible, backgrounds look like 1st year Photoshop stuff.

I agree with the expression in number 2 :(
The font is the common font for comic books ( that is what i wanted to recreate) Backgrounds ( it is my first year ) Thank you
Actually, the common font for comic books is "comic sans". It looks a bit like very neat handwriting, found in dialogue bubbles and plot text boxes. It looks a lot like this.
 
Sorry, I think everything about them is cheesy. Questionable facial expressions in 1-2, the font is horrible, backgrounds look like 1st year Photoshop stuff.

I agree with the expression in number 2 :(
The font is the common font for comic books ( that is what i wanted to recreate) Backgrounds ( it is my first year ) Thank you
Actually, the common font for comic books is "comic sans". It looks a bit like very neat handwriting, found in dialogue bubbles and plot text boxes. It looks a lot like this.

Thanks Man :D
 
The second one is a bit odd and unrealistic due to the angle. Rightfully she should be face down on concrete...

Also, I agree that she shouldn't have her finger on the trigger if the gun is facing the ground and she's not aiming at anything. It's a good way to shoot a hole through your foot, and it just looks unrealistic. It doesn't matter if it's a real gun or not, it's just something that people who know a thing or two about guns would catch.

It's also apparently raining in the second photo, yet she doesn't seem to be phased or dampened by it. Her hair is dry.

You've got potential with editing, I just think these aren't particularly strong.
 
These are cool!

I'll add my comments on the text as well.

In the first, it seems you were trying to mimic the lines of the backgroundvand failed.
Visually the wrong angles 2 ways is really distracting. The second pic has great angles, very nice composition, but the you blow it with text that creates a visual arc.
 

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