Oklahoma

KamaKazzy · Oct 13, 2007

Three shot from my trip to Oklahoma. Remember, I have no editing program...
1.) My grandmother actually owns this, and several others. They still work

2.) Barn I went looking for rattlesnakes around

3.) Field I looked for rattlesnakes

C & C wanted!!

Coldow91 · Oct 13, 2007

They look good except the horizon in the first in slanted, in the second I wish I could see more of the barn, and in the last I would have rather liked to see more of either the sky and or the ground. But other than that they seem to be exposed well, and the focus is good. I would just work a little on the composition.

KamaKazzy · Oct 13, 2007

Thanks!

Mike Jordan · Oct 13, 2007

So, where are the pictures of the rattlesnakes?

The oil well needs to be rotated a bit clockwise. The barn I would not have cropped so much to the right on it.

My mom owns some shares of a number of oil wells in Oklahoma. She gets a check every now and then, but it's not for much.

Mike

NateS · Oct 13, 2007

While I know that rules can be violated in certain areas and look great.......I think these would look a lot better if you had stuck to the rule of thirds. The way they are now just looks too snapshotty (yes I made up a word). Adding a little contrast or saturation would help the sky stand out better too.

dinodan · Oct 14, 2007

A little straightening on that first one, and getting rid of that pole on the left doesn't hurt...

KamaKazzy · Oct 14, 2007

Thanks everyone.
I didn't alter these pics at all, no program to do so, but I'm working on that.
Mike...we didn't find any rattlesnakes. It sucked, but I did come home with a tarantula.
Oh...and these were just snap shots I took but when I looked at them they didn't look too bad.