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Iron Flatline
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Hi all.
My wife loves this shot, whereas I feel it's not really that good. I don't think it is compositionally particularly interesting, and I've not been able work with it. I've decided to pursue it in B&W cause I can't seem to make anything else really fly. Please let me know what you think.
Some of you are very good hands-on, and prefer to show rather than describe what you would do. For you, I am uploading a PSD file (though it is not the one I used to come up with the JPGs, I deleted that) as well as the RAW file. It is a DNG from a Leica M8, so you'll need the latest Adobe Raw Converter Plug-In to make it work.
I'm also going to upload a couple of JPGs for those of you who only work in that particular format.
This one was converted using Alien Skin Exposure Black & White Film emulator, specifically low-grain Tri-X 100:
This one was done with Rob Carr's B&W Converter Action:
One more in color, minor adjustments, not cropped:
As you can see, they're not perfect. I am having a tough time finding a good crop, and I believe the image needs it. The composition as is doesn't work for me. Fortunately it's pretty sharp, so it can be cropped pretty tightly.
If you are interested, you can download the PSD file here
And if you are REALLY motivated, you can download the DNG (RAW) file here
I look forward to spending the next several days seeing what the TPF Community can teach me.
Oh, and feel free to tell me if you like it. Maybe my wife is right, it wouldn't be the first or last time....
My wife loves this shot, whereas I feel it's not really that good. I don't think it is compositionally particularly interesting, and I've not been able work with it. I've decided to pursue it in B&W cause I can't seem to make anything else really fly. Please let me know what you think.
Some of you are very good hands-on, and prefer to show rather than describe what you would do. For you, I am uploading a PSD file (though it is not the one I used to come up with the JPGs, I deleted that) as well as the RAW file. It is a DNG from a Leica M8, so you'll need the latest Adobe Raw Converter Plug-In to make it work.
I'm also going to upload a couple of JPGs for those of you who only work in that particular format.
This one was converted using Alien Skin Exposure Black & White Film emulator, specifically low-grain Tri-X 100:
This one was done with Rob Carr's B&W Converter Action:
One more in color, minor adjustments, not cropped:
As you can see, they're not perfect. I am having a tough time finding a good crop, and I believe the image needs it. The composition as is doesn't work for me. Fortunately it's pretty sharp, so it can be cropped pretty tightly.
If you are interested, you can download the PSD file here
And if you are REALLY motivated, you can download the DNG (RAW) file here
I look forward to spending the next several days seeing what the TPF Community can teach me.
Oh, and feel free to tell me if you like it. Maybe my wife is right, it wouldn't be the first or last time....