Opinions on my edits

[CalebNV]

I would just like to hear some opinions/ criticism on these photos I took of my sister. Is there anything I can fix to make them better?
(I know the first one has some pretty contrasted, dark shadows)

 

[CalebNV]

But I thinly the shadows are just harsh from the vignetting.

 

[KmH]

Post the un-edited images too if you want C&C on your edits.

 

[Ilovemycam]

Freaky bokeh, purdy girl. Nice!

 

[The_Traveler]

IMO, too much skin smoothing.

 

[Devinhullphoto]

IMO, too much skin smoothing.

Agreed. Looks overly fake.