Perspective

[DeepSpring]

 

[Mindii]

I like the perspective, but the shot itslelf lacks some punch. Perhaps a touch of contrast will fix it? Or a conversion to mono???

 

[DeepSpring]

I'm new at this


can you please explain conversion to mono?

 

[LaFoto]

She means to desaturate it so much that all the colours are gone and you got a black+white version of this photo ... although I would think it a pity to see the yellow of these train carriages go, it is quite an intense yellow which goes well with the blue of his (your?) clothing and the sky.
This isn't a camera phone pic, by any chance?

 

[AprilRamone]

Like the composition, but I wish you could see more of his face. maybe you could dodge it a bit?

 

[DeepSpring]

no not a camera phone
canon rebel k2

I want to re-do it with someone else because hes just one of those people who just cant i dont know look right? he looks sad or something

 

[AprilRamone]

If you are going to do it again, maybe use a reflector or something to get some more light on their face. (Maybe having them not wear a hat would help?)