Philadelphia Engagement Shoot

boker137

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I shot an engagement shoot for a coworker on Kelly Drive in Philadelphia this past weekend. Always looking for C&C as I continue my attempts to improve.







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aside from the first photo IMO you have too much dead space. I would say work on composition. decide when to include lots of back ground and when to keep it tight and work on your WB.
 
Except the first one, the lighting is not the best, seems like the light(sun) is in front of you in most and washing out there faces.
 
#1 The best of the lot but looks a little soft to my eyes.
#2 To much dead space.
#3 over exposed and has red hues.
#4 To much dead space.
#5 Looks under exposed and to much dead space.
 

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