Photo Shoot C&C 7 pics

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Was bored today and asked my little sister if she wanted some new Facebook Profile pics. She said yes of course...C&C appreciated. Be harsh.

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I know its pic heavy. Sue me. Haha...
 

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It throws me off that most of them are tilted. She's beautiful though. :)
 

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If the idea was posing, you should have avoided frontal poses. But tried more 45 degrees poses to make her thiner (photo #5)... But even then, good job. Keep practicing.;)
 

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Nicely done...
However the tilting in some of them is often viewed more headache than creative, but as a facebook picture I mean who really cares? Her buddies will all love that kind of thing.

In number one the blur in the front is too much for me, it's just a big distraction.

-- Other than that they turned out very good IMO
 

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you need to add fill flash.
 

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Not too bad! 2 & 4 look a little soft in the face. The flare in #6 is distracting and could have been done without, IMO. Other than that, looks like you could use some fill flash.
 

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All but #2 are fairly well done. :thumbup:

#2 just seems flat and cold. The outfit is funky too, denim(?) skirt with baby blue top(?) I'm no fashion expert, but it's not attractive IMO.

Also, be weary of sweater material in general...the camera/flash goes right through it. It's not an issue here, since she's wearing a white under-shirt, but something to look out for in the future so you don't see undergarments.
 
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Thanks for the help guys. I had my 430 ex idk why i wasnt using it...
 

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This is a really nice set.. The blown out area of #6 kills me though. Nice work!
 

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The set works for a fun type of shoot.
The posts above have hit alot of good points. Just watch the exposure and the flares.
The tilting I like only if you have the same shot without tilting too. Let the client pick.

All in all... nice. Thanks for sharing.
 

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I think 5 is a really good pic. I also like 4. The rest of them the sky is blowen out really bad though.
 

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Pretty good, particularly the composition, but for me they lack pop so I have to second the comment they all needed fill or OCF (particularly #1 which also has a strong yellow/green color cast from the grass). I also have to second the shoulders square to the camera comment as not being a great pose.
 

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The 'tilt' effect works for 1, but not for 4 and 7. And maybe crop out the bottom in 1.
 

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