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I'm a newbie on artistic stuff
but myself and my kids like brownies
so my 2 cents
The main brownie (5 & 6) does look upside down and not appealing - I think Derrel said "sponge" looking. Whereas the chunks off to the side do show off the flaky top. Flip the big brownie over to show off the flaky chocolate layer. And maybe tilt the plate a bit to show it off a bit better.
The model I think is great but she looks like she does NOT want to eat one - I know it is kinda a hip, fun type shot but not wanting to eat one makes me not want to eat one. If her lips were around the brownie taking a real bite then it would be better. Have the model actually eat and chew a couple (she could still spit them out). did she even eat one ?? Looks like she is totally adverse to, which affects the people wanting to buy some.
the fork does look fake, get a real stainless steel fork with mass to it. A gold plated one might make it look "richer" too.
great camera & lighting work to me
but myself and my kids like brownies
so my 2 cents
The main brownie (5 & 6) does look upside down and not appealing - I think Derrel said "sponge" looking. Whereas the chunks off to the side do show off the flaky top. Flip the big brownie over to show off the flaky chocolate layer. And maybe tilt the plate a bit to show it off a bit better.
The model I think is great but she looks like she does NOT want to eat one - I know it is kinda a hip, fun type shot but not wanting to eat one makes me not want to eat one. If her lips were around the brownie taking a real bite then it would be better. Have the model actually eat and chew a couple (she could still spit them out). did she even eat one ?? Looks like she is totally adverse to, which affects the people wanting to buy some.
the fork does look fake, get a real stainless steel fork with mass to it. A gold plated one might make it look "richer" too.
great camera & lighting work to me