Pix for C&C

[Erithacus]

Some pics taken during my recent vacation. Your C&C will be very much appreciated.

#1. Incense

#2. Shoes

#3. Soft drinks.

#4. Slippers.

 

[puyjapin]

quite like last one

 

[Ouhei]

#3 and 4 are nice shots, the focus on #2 seems to be a bit off? And I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at in #1.

 

[puyjapin]

i think 3 may have been better if the foilage was replaced by a boat. plus the bottles r underexposed.

 

[puyjapin]

may be a bit more like this..

 

[reznap]

^ Those are incense - like incense chandeliers.. pretty sweet. The photo is a bit abstract as is. No sure about the space you were working with but showing these at other angles might look cool.

#3 would be better if you could see all of the bottles and read all of the labels. Also a palm tree further in the distance (so you can see more of it in the frame) would have been really nice. That's a much different composition but that's what I would have looked for. Also the bottles are a bit on the dark side. Flash/reflector or something would help.

EDIT: that edit puyjapin posted is much better as far as the brightness. I'd rotate it a little counter-clockwise so the bottles aren't leaning.

#2's blurry and a bit uninteresting.

#4: Great pattern and color. This is a pretty cool shot - good eye.

Not trying to come off extra harsh, looking forward to seeing more posts from you. You live in a beautiful and interesting country, so definitely please post more.

 

[Erithacus]

Thanks for your comments. I will try to improve on that.

As for the shoes, I focused on the wrong part.

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

I really like 1, 3, & 4 but like someone else mentioned, a little underexposed. The bottles are my fav!

 

[KenC]

All good shots. I might crop the left side of the first one (light area is a little distracting) and fix the tilt of the bottles. You have an eye for interesting compositions and I look forward to more.

 

[GeorgieGirl]

I like 'em!:thumbup:

 

[Lazy Photographer]

The last one and the shoes really work, but they're all pretty cool. Shame the cream coloured bottle on the right is turned away from the camera.

 

[UnderThePink]

Really like #4. Great exposure. Those colors really pop!

 

[Erithacus]

Points taken.