Please Criticize What Has Been Done

[tkaat]

I have started to use Photoshop 3 extended to learn how to retouch photos and tried it on one of my lil sister's graduation dinner picture. I just started using photoshop last week so pretty new here. Pleas show me the ways of properly retouching photos.

You can try retouching it yourslf if you please

also I didn't take the picture my dad did with his Kodak Z712

 

[Rhubarb]

I think you may of forgot to link the pic? I can't see anything.

 

[Alpha]

Did you leave out the "r" in Freeport, Bahamas intentionally?

Because right now it says freepot.

 

[julie32]

that is hysterical, Alpha. I love it!