poetry .3.

[motcon]

all through these eyes
you may
look not
for from these tarnish
brings no higher return
all i see is (
priceless ageless-
eternally young
and weightless
more valuable and
heavier than metals precious
that i
carry through acres of seasons
that from my impressions
bloom flowers of i (eye
and remembrance

 

[koda-46]

...... no comment..... it kind of had no structure or rhythm at all........

 

[motcon]

then why comment at all?

research: abstract and concrete forms of poetry

a la ee cummings

sorry to make you 'think'.

 

[koda-46]

okay?.........