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#1 lighten up and add contrast
#2 same, but correct WB - a bit too much red
easier to c&c on pp if you showed before n after, or noted what processing was done
Which would b best candidate to print frame n hang - #4
nice pics, personal pref - add some of the outdoor view, perhaps have her look out the window rather than at camera
I second FarrahJ's comments. Try putting some distance between the background and the subject, and obviously open that aperature up if you have that option. If you can open the aperature up past f5.6, that'll help too.:thumbup:Thanks for the input. I really need to find a better place to take pictures of the girls. That window is really hard to get the light right and the background out of focus just right.
honestly? these are great snapshots. In both cases, your SOOC shots look better than your pp'd versions. The first pp'd photo is wayyyy too warm. In this case, there is nothing wrong with the coloring...but rather the background.
There are issues with the photo composition, but I like this one the best so far. Nice job.
G what do you see as compostion issues.
Exactly. Always pay attention to your backgrounds. As Farrah mentioned, the piece of trim sticking out of her head is distracting, keep her head in a cleap spot if possible. It's not always possible, but when you can, do so. It usually means, taking step to either side and recomping the shot. I'll also add that you need to give her some breathing room w/ in the photo. It looks like she's just peaking in the frame to say and is going to slip away at any moment.G what do you see as compostion issues.
it's still a snapshot. you can only do so much to improve the composition of a snapshot. for one...she has a piece of wood coming out of her head. For another...she looks like she's just randomly sitting by a window and you took her picture to practice exposure. And lastly...you used your flash and have pinpoint catchlights.