MichaelHenson
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So, the other day I agreed to do some photos for a coworker that sells crocheted hats/scarves, etc. She had a Hello Kitty hat and purse she gave to my daughter in exchange for some photos. Well, life got busy and by the time I got around to getting some photos it had been about 4 days, it was bedtime, and my daughter was cranky...and my wife wasn't the most willing assistant...and the setting wasn't the greatest... That being said, I feel like I could have done much worse.
So, these were taken in my kitchen, too close to the wall, with my wife holding my flash with the Lumiquest softbox just out of the frame.
1.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-1 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
2.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-3 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
3.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-4 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
4.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-9 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
My personal gripes:
- I don't like the shadow on the wall behind her. I think that had I a bit more time I could have moved her away from the wall a bit to darken the background.
- I wish I hadn't cut off the bottom of the purse on #3.
I'm sure there are more areas for improvement...Let me know what you think/where I can improve. If you'd prefer to just critique a single image and ignore the rest, feel free to do that too!
Thanks all!
So, these were taken in my kitchen, too close to the wall, with my wife holding my flash with the Lumiquest softbox just out of the frame.
1.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-1 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
2.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-3 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
3.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-4 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
4.
SOOY - Hello Kitty-9 by mhenson1104, on Flickr
My personal gripes:
- I don't like the shadow on the wall behind her. I think that had I a bit more time I could have moved her away from the wall a bit to darken the background.
- I wish I hadn't cut off the bottom of the purse on #3.
I'm sure there are more areas for improvement...Let me know what you think/where I can improve. If you'd prefer to just critique a single image and ignore the rest, feel free to do that too!
Thanks all!