Safari

[fotonemer]

Originally put it in general gallery- but i would like some critique!
Any comments, i can take it.
Took this in the Kruger National Park, on "Safari"
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[behindthelens]

I think that the first photo is beautiful. I think that the second one would be better if the sky was dimmer or coloured. with the overcast it just adds too much glare to the top of the photo and takes attention away from the target of your photo. I like the lightings on the rocks, with the over-exposed on one side and regular exposure on the other side. But the sky is the only thing that makes the photo not perfect to me.

 

[wini]

The second photo seems a little too bright to me. The picture seems overwhelmed by the sun.

 

[meotter]

yea, 2nd photo has the sky blown out.

first pic is nice composition and nice colors, but i think it needs a filter or something, i feel like the sun overpowers the rest of the photo to the point of distraction.