Sculpture - Thoughts?

[MichaelHenson]

Okay, here's a shot that I really like...I tend to shy away from asking for critiques, especially on images I love, because I tend to get overwhelmed with my lack of knowledge. But, I have to get over that because I definitely want to keep improving...so here goes!

City Garden (9 of 38) by mhenson1104, on Flickr

I know that I need to clone out the piece of a building from the upper right corner, just haven't had the chance yet...

Thanks!

 

[Designer]

Technically, it's not too bad. Compositionally, it needs something else.

Maybe if you give us the name and address of the sculptor we can send him some hate mail.

 

[MichaelHenson]

Technically, it's not too bad. Compositionally, it needs something else.

Maybe if you give us the name and address of the sculptor we can send him some hate mail.

I'm assuming you're referencing the composition of the sculpture? Yeah, I think it's missing the head... But it's interesting and I like it!

 

[ristretto]

It may seem an odd suggestion but crop off the top of the building just above where the top of the head would be.