Second Mind (a poem)

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I was just perusing my finder on my notebook and found this poem that I wrote last fall. I don't have a lot of poetry, so I figured I'd share some of what I have. So, here it is, critique if you want, I certainly don't mind.

Second Mind:
Last night,
Quite a night,
I saw the light,
Spoke to her second mind.
In her second mind,
What did I find?
Love so pure it’s blind.
Love so strong it binds.
Secrets so secret,
They’re one of a kind.
Knowledge attained,
She’s one of a kind.
I’m more in love than before,
I’m more sure than ever before
All because,
I spoke to her second mind.
 

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