second time in the studio

g4rry

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Heres a few images of my second time in the studio.As a begginer all your feed back will be taken in good faith
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Some are way under exposed, white balance is all over the place, naked arm pits are very unappealing, way to many photos for detailed C&C, work on presentation by putting at least one carriage return between each photo.

I recommend posting no more than 1 at a time for C&C.

SmugMug | How to get pleasing skin tone

http://www.becoming-mom.net/2010/02/03/skintones-by-the-numbers-photoshop-tutorial/

http://super.nova.org/DPR/Technique/ZZ.html

http://www.photoflexlightingschool.com/Lighting_Lessons/index.html
 
Nice shots but agree with KmH that some are underexposed. Make sure the background is set to two stops over the model - also ensure the iso in the light meter is the same as on your camera. This is usually an error most people make - me included.
 
White balance is all over the place, she looks red, magenta, blue, orange....

also, did you try to make the background brighter in post? I see some gray from her hair.
 

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