Secrets Between Sisters - Take 2

[sjconner]

I re-shot the two sisters telling each other secrets. I used the window light and added the magic reflector. I used f2.8 instead of f1.7 that made it a tad easier to focus. I also reposed them as per the suggestions of others. What do you think of this one? Is it better?

Thanks, Susan

 

[supraman215]

I would like this one better if they were more engaged in each other and less on the camera. I think it would add the level of intimacy you were looking for in this scene. Also too much PP on the softness.

my $0.02 FWIW