Self-Portrait Attempt

[Trenton Romulox]

Hey everyone!
I decided to give a go at a self-portrait today. Any critique is greatly appreciated! Lay it all out there, I'm not afraid of some hardcore criticisms. :]

 

[IonSpeedMaster]

out of focus?

 

[Ajay]

red x for me

 

[kundalini]

Yeah, the right elbow is spot on, but the face is out. Movement?

 

[Trenton Romulox]

Yeah, okay, how about stuff beyond the focus. Self-portraits are an über-b$#& HAHA. So, beyond the obvious focusing...anything else to work on?

 

[heip]

When looking out of the shot put the space where the person is looking, not behind. IMO.

 

[Shane]

Skin tones are off.

 

[IonSpeedMaster]

your head looks photochopped into the picture cause of that shadow covering your neck.