Self-Portrait Attempt

Trenton Romulox

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Hey everyone!
I decided to give a go at a self-portrait today. Any critique is greatly appreciated! Lay it all out there, I'm not afraid of some hardcore criticisms. :]

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Yeah, the right elbow is spot on, but the face is out. Movement?
 
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Yeah, okay, how about stuff beyond the focus. Self-portraits are an über-b$#& HAHA. So, beyond the obvious focusing...anything else to work on?
 

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When looking out of the shot put the space where the person is looking, not behind. IMO.
 

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