Senior Portraits- My 2nd Set since Starting

[Pea-Pod]

C&C please

So here are some shots of senior portraits I did this past weekend. This is only my 2nd time ever doing senior portraits and could use a bit of critiquing or anything you all can give me. There is quite a difference from the first time I did Senior Pictures. These are just a few. I still have alot to learn but I am getting there!!
Thanks in Advance!

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[EFHATCH1990]

I like the set but I think 1 and 4 would look better if he was looking somewhere in the frame overall I like them :thumbup:

 

[KillerKowalski]

1. It looks as this is the best focused one. Straighten out the angle though. Also, the shadow from the pole on his head take a brush and add some exposure.

7. Looks as if he is holding something that should be left for personal time (maybe that's why he is smiling the biggest?!?!).

 

[Pea-Pod]

7. Looks as if he is holding something that should be left for personal time (maybe that's why is the biggest smile?!?!).

I didnt even see that. Thanks so much! gave me quite the chuckle!