Shannon - another beautiful senior (please critique)

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I like the composition. Any other poses?
 

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Awesome lighting. I really like the way you posed her with the hair trailing out. Nicely done.
 

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Nice job.
Fun composition, she looks natural in the pose, I like the lighting.
 

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She's beautiful! I do agree, the hair falling down is quite nice!
 

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Nice job.
Fun composition, she looks natural in the pose, I like the lighting.

Lighting is awesome, but 'natural in that pose'?

That's the most awkward position/expression i've ever seen.




...almost.
 

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hi there.
here is a question from a beginner

what is she laying on? is it a painted floor or some sort of material?

i like it but my beginner brain cant think of what it could be.

thanks for the help and i love the picture. its not a typical senior shot that you always see.

thanks
Gian
 
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hi there.
here is a question from a beginner

what is she laying on? is it a painted floor or some sort of material?

i like it but my beginner brain cant think of what it could be.

thanks for the help and i love the picture. its not a typical senior shot that you always see.

thanks
Gian

The floor is vinyl flooring installed upside down and running all the way up the wall to create a white cove, I then painted it with primer (very important), then the floor portion is painted with several coats of pure white polyurethane enamel, and the wall portion is painted with a flat pure white latex house paint.
 

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i just wish seniors looked like that when i was her age.
 

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Good all around. I think the tan line is great. Lighting is wonderful. Color too. One beautiful subject. :thumbup:
 

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