Shannon. Your C&C desired

[Trever1t]

One from the archives that I edited yesterday. Sometimes I pass over a decent look. Sometimes it's ok to go back and review.Tastes change. Skillset needed to polish the gem improves.


_POR3517-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr


Not the most experienced model, not really a model. A student. I girl I know. True beauty. Shannon.

 

[ClickAddict]

After seeing you call this one of your "pass overs" I had to follow your link to your site to see what you considered a good shot. lol Awesome work.

 

[dxqcanada]

Breast area is too bright.
The eyes bug me ... or look too buggy.

 

[dxqcanada]

or maybe I should say eyes too much ?

 

[SquarePeg]

I like this. It seems softer than others that you've posted here. Maybe a different color palette?

 

[Granddad]

Gorgeous as usual, but I agree that the eyes are a tad overdone... IMHO.

 

[Trever1t]

I feel the same about the eyes, odd because I barely touched them but I suppose what I did do wasn't necessary.

 

[mmaria]

- breasts too bright (lost some details there)
- the yellow bg is too bright, yellow is too strong
- that blurred blob of the fens in bg is a distraction

jmo or preference

 

[jcdeboever]

Crap, I don't see anything wrong. Great shot. I might as well quit now if that is not good enough.

 

[Watchful]

The shirt collar is overexposed.

 

[Trever1t]

So while I don't disagree, rather I do agree with the comments, I'm of the mindset that a little blown highlights, over abundance of yellow background and other minor issue really don't bother me.
The eyes, ya, I'd see what I could do there.

A technically perfect image may be a sterile one. Some imperfection may be overall more natural . Just my opinion

 

[Rgollar]

I dont mind the chest being to bright as I think it draws the focus on her face. I think it amazing and love the background.