She's Dead

[sillyphaunt]

Critiques? Ideas? Better perspectives?

 

[Artemis]

Hmm...nice idea...but I dont like the feet, because even though I know its a doll...its to plasticy...perhaps try doing a view from a diagonal? you know, looking at its face from the side? and convert it to black and white

 

[AIRIC]

She needs a toe tag

 

[sillyphaunt]

 

[mentos_007]

hahaha

 

[willg133]

the color looks off a bit on the magenta side...as for the subject, the dof is a good idea, but the feet are not much to look at--they are plain and smooth. its kind of funny though

 

[leecheewei85]

Hey!~ idea was there but the proportion wasn't really clear...
i was looking at the picture and was wondering if the 'LEg' on the extreme right belongs to the same doll? if so, then the head seemed a little displaced...
Perhaps, to clear the air, you could change the perspective? just a suggestion though!~ PEACE!~

 

[cloudten]

good idea, i like the parallels with pictures of deceased humans... but the doll's feet are just too abstract to look like feet. they look like... a fruit or smthng. perhaps with some more clues as to the rest of the doll it'd help.

 

[mpdc]

She needs a toe tag

Thats just wrong.

 

[slow 2 snap]

:hail:

 

[siv]

. . . the dof is a good idea . . .

dof? down on floor?

 

[meotter]

dof = depth of field

hehe... but maybe he meant down on floor

 

[chroix]

I'd like to see one with the face in focus.. weird dead eyes..