Since I mentioned I shoot video in a topic.

[zombiesniper]

Most of my video's are not production quality. They're just for my and friend enjoyment of our hobbies.
Here are two below. I'll take pointers where i can.

Drumming. 2012.
WARNING song has explicit lyrics.


An airsoft gun review. 2015

 

[CherylL]

The first video with the photos zooming, it looks smoother when the zoom is continuous from beginning to end (instead of start and stop). Looks like they are all the same rate of speed which is good!

The second video has good light inside and good exposure. Do you use a mic? I picked up a Rode Videomic Pro last year and works great for that price point. I used it last year on one of my cameras for my daughter's wedding ceremony & reception. At the ceremony I had 2 friends operate my cameras. I thought about selling it after the wedding, but I use it to interview the grandkids. I make little video vignettes of them.
Also on the second video I would suggest a dip to black transition between the inside and the outside shots. This will give a little time to adjust to changing of scenes.
Maybe sprinkle in a few closeup shots of the gun while you talk to add interest.

I'm not a pro, just my thoughts

 

[zombiesniper]

Thanks.
Good points.
I am planning on a mic which is why i haven't done the few reviews that I have piling up. lol