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scarymaggiecopy.jpg

4x5 paper negative positive.
i like how her eyes relate with her nose and lip piercings.
it sort of looks like a statue, probably because this was lit from below, but also because of the expression. she looks like stone.
comments or suggestions?
t.r.
 
Very interesting image...I wouldn't have guessed it was a she... For critique I would say that maybe just a tad more light might help...the ring through the nose is a little hard to tell that it's a ring b/c its too dark. Just looks like two white scratches...but too much light would probably ruin the effect you were going for...
 
I feel that this image could benefit from a tiny amount more light and a tighter crop.

Just my opinion though.

R
 

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