Some Honest Critique on some of my Pictures

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Lesjordans, Jul 19, 2006.

  1. Jul 19, 2006 #1
    Lesjordans

    Lesjordans TPF Noob!

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    I was 14 When i shot most of these except the Wires one, Im 15 now (Just). Can i have some honest comments and criticism to see how im getting along?

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/33264074/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/36267570/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/34602322/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/32810166/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/29884425/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/28334499/

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/26545907/

    Thanks
    Jordan


     
  2. Jul 19, 2006 #2
    fotonemer

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    I liked your 1st one. really good composition
     
  3. Jul 19, 2006 #3
    LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, nothing can beat a good lightning shot such as the one you managed to capture!

    And I believe we have seen some others of these before and I have commented on the wires, or so I feel, before (?)

    I like the last, that old typewriter, but am wondering where the light comes from. It is a strong source and throws very many shadows...

    You photography all in all is good. There is no doubt. Very promising!
    You know where to look, and how to frame, and how to use DOF (see the photo of the platform). Practise more, show us more, but maybe try to show them directly, if that is possible (?)
     
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    Dope Hat

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    Your lightning one is wonderful. And of course made you famous. Thank God for the 4th of May.
     
  5. Jul 20, 2006 #5
    Lesjordans

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    Yeah the lightning one made front page, but the rest havnt seen the light of day

    Thanks for the comments everyone
     
  6. Jul 20, 2006 #6
    Unimaxium

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    Awesome shots. You've got a very good eye. Plus some good glass on that camera (L lens yummmm) ;-)
     
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    Arch

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    great shots..... your certainly doing very well for your age :thumbup:
     
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    Lesjordans

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    Thank you very much, Yeah the L glass should come in handy, next i need a wide angle L lens :p
     

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