Your lighting looks so much better in these!
I wish your background was a bit darker, but I'm not sure how to tell you to achieve that. I'm sure someone else here would know though.
I like the pose in #1, but I wish we could see her eyes a bit better. They look like all whites and no iris. Maybe have her look a little more towards the camera this time.
And I agree with the others - pick your faves and post those.
The posing looks a little unnatural. I missed the previous threads, so I don't know what this event is, but next time try to talk to your model to get to know them a little and you will see how it reflects on your shots. Usually the model looks a lot more relaxed and natural.