Some of my B&W - Critiques welcome

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Here's a few of the B&W shots that I like, and one selective colored one! Critiques are always welcome, and be brutal.


1. The Watcher
Love this shot, but I still haven't gotten the faux bokeh right yet with regards to around him - but I love how chunky it is
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2. Secrets
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3. Pins
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4. Sushi
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i am usually not a fan of selective coloring, but i am partial to sushi in many respects. good stuff.
 
I like #1, but the hightlights in #2 are WAY blown out. The sushi one is cool. The third one is kinda..eh.. I just don't think it's a good subject and it's focused kina...odd.

Keep at it!
 
I really like the concept in number 2, I didn't notice the blown out of in the picture until Weaving Wax mention it. The rest of the shot are good but number 2 stand out because of it creativity.
 

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