some recent shots of music artist...let me know

[spazmonkeyy]

here's a recent shoot of an artist I took with
a D80. let me know your thoughts everyone.
thanx

 

[Rabieshund]

First shot is awesome, I really like it. The others are a little boring and I don't really like wide angle portraits you have going on there. But the first one is great, do more stuff like that!

 

[RubyMagic]

I personally like them all. Just a little overedited imho.

 

[AprilRamone]

I would like to see more variety as almost all of these are "up the nose" angles. However, I think that 2nd shot works the best out of all of the angles from below.
I love the idea for the first. But, there's something about it that isn't working. It's hard to put my finger on, but I'm thinking it looks a little muddy? Especially his face.