Space Needle *critics please*

[Skyline]

Anything I can do to make these pics even better? I need some reference so I can try take better pics when I go there again.

Thank you,
Will

 

[Mesoam]

i really like the first once, if only the mountain were more clear

 

[castrol]

I like the second one better. Shot a little bit later... includes a
little bit more of the city, and a little less uneventful sky. Pretty
nice shot. Maybe another shot just little bit later than that one?

 

[meotter]

less sky... much less sky. there is nothing there and it only competes for attention. too bad about the mountain not being clearer. they're nice shots, just need less sky

 

[Skyline]

less sky... much less sky. there is nothing there and it only competes for attention. too bad about the mountain not being clearer. they're nice shots, just need less sky

hm... probably just need to take the sky out? because if I point the camera lower, there's a park and lots of trees down there. I'll try to crop it soon thanks for the idea.

 

[Skyline]

done! let me know what you guys think now

 

[castrol]

Now straighten out that horizon and you have yourself a winner.

 

[Stranger]

cropped version is my favorite.. great work on the composition as well, i like how the buildings shrink off as they go through the frame

 

[SusieC]

I agree that the cropped version is gorgeous! Great shot.

 

[391615]

I really love the second photo, excluding the mountain in the background which you can hardly see anyway. some good editing there. I'd consider a UFO flying around maybe.....???

 

[meotter]

the edit looks great less sky for the win!

 

[Alpha]

double expose during dusk and then daylight. There's your shot.

 

[britonk]

Love the cropped version - agree with Castrol though it needs twisting clockwise ever-so-slightly.