Spontaneous Portrait (3pics)

[vonDrehle]

Yesterday I was outside just seeing if I could find something to shoot. Turns out my sisters was bored as well so I got some pictures of her.

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3.

Any ideas on how to better them next is welcome. (ask critique)

 

[oldnavy170]

I really like the second one on the top row. I like how she is standing in that photo.

 

[vonDrehle]

Thanks, that is my favorite as well.

 

[asr84]

yes, nice indeed. How did you take the picture? f??, etc... just curious.

 

[vonDrehle]

Thanks.
Copied and Pasted from dA.
1. Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed: 1/49 second
F Number: F/4.0
Focal Length: 58 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Jan 26, 2007, 4:45:25 PM

2. Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed: 1/99 second
F Number: F/6.3
Focal Length: 73 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Jan 26, 2007, 4:49:34 PM

3. Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed: 1/49 second
F Number: F/4.0
Focal Length: 40 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Jan 26, 2007, 4:44:49 PM

 

[asr84]

Nice, thanks for accurate information!

 

[Jazz]

Very nice photos. I like them all.

For critique: On the 2nd, I'm imagining how much simpler and cleaner it would look without the tree at the top, which seems distracting. And, I'd like to see her hands instead of having them going straight out of the frame. On the 3rd, same thing, lose the tree in upper right. And, I'd rather see just a nice natural pose, I think. (Chin up and breathe, relax).

Just my two cents.

 

[oCyrus55]

I like these photos, good color! And they are very sharp, good stuff