I like where you were going with this one but I think a better framing would elevate this photo. I dont like the branch in the lower left but you can't really crop it as you would have a branch sitting right on the bottom of your shot. As well, the background vertical branch is jarring and breaks up the photo to much. Make a few steps back might allow you to frame the foreground branches better.
Noticed you live in Cleveland, I live in the Chagrin Falls Area.
Ok so i like the color and think the cropping could use work. I was trying to get a picture of the sun through or behind something and this was my best picture from the day.