Street Light Couple

KiddQue

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Most recent photo that I took while at a bar in dallas. Any critique?
 
I think it could seriously do with a crop to get rid of dead space, and emphasize the three main items in the image.

maybe like this..

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I find the angle you shot at to be the biggest issue. IMO it kills the implied romance, subjugates them, and almost makes it seem like they are fleeing from you.
 
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I find the angle you shot at to be the biggest issue. IMO it kills the implied romance, subjugates them, and almost makes it seem like they are fleeing from you.

I agree. It's very impersonal, for a personal title line. It just looks like a sot taken of a couple on street level, from a second/third, story window.
 
Stalker 101, classes held every week night. Don't miss your shot!

Sorry... j/k....
 
Stalker 101, classes held every week night. Don't miss your shot!

Sorry... j/k....

Hey.. at least there are no crosshairs, that WOULD be scary! lol!
 
I think it's an interesting picture, but I wish the highlights on the man's shirt and on the sidewalk weren't quite so hot.
 
Looks better with the crop. Kinda bugs how the man is out of focus. But not a horrible picture at all to me.
 
Lol low key it does kind of look weird now hahaha. Would it have been a better choice? Or is it the downward shot that makes it look awkward?
 

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