Sunset with friends

[abhishekdg]

Went for a camping trip to Moose lake with friends. 2 of my friends wanted to have silhouttes against the sun and I too got n opportunity to try out m hands at sunset.
So, without any further waits got the below mentioned 2 pics. Your C&C will be highly appreciated.

 

[WesternGuy]

Nice silhouettes, but they look a little oversaturated - too red/orange. The first one is not bad - relaxing after a hard day fishing. On the second one, you cropped off the bottom a bit too much - always nice to see the feet and what they are standing on.
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WesternGuy

 

[jed_rollins]

I'm with Western Guy. I love the subject material, great potential. A bit over saturated. Almost feels like an HDR that went a bit overboard. Would have loved to see the dock that the guy is standing in in frame 2. Great shots though! Good spotting of a good time to be shooting!
Cheers,
Jed

 

[abhishekdg]

Thanks guys for the great comments.. Really love the way you guys criticise to make newbies like me realize the faults.Here are a couple more . Want to know your views on the same

 

[slackercruster]

WOW!!

 

[LShooter]

Really like the 2nd set more than the first. The first set is just a bit to overprocesesed for the look you're going for. 2nd set has more charm.

 

[SCraig]

Read up on the Rule of Thirds. They are gorgeous shots however virtually everything is dead center which doesn't help your composition.

 

[Joel_W]

As others have already said, the 1st set is way over saturated. The 2nd set the light is more natural. 3 out of the 4 pictures you have the subjects dead center. In the remaining picture, the boat and setting sun are off centered, making for a much more interesting and pleasing image to view.