The lighting looks nice and soft...and the model certainly looks good.
The pose however, looks like it could use improvement. Her right hand is almost buried...and leaning on it like that...causes her shoulder to bulge out. I'm not sure what to think about the other hand...touching her foot...but I think it attracts more attention than it should. The face is great though and is the strongest part of the image...as it should be.
thanks guys. i just got reamed for this shot on another forum, but now i understand how important posing the model is. i still have a lot to learn in that area. i usually just let them do whatever they want while i shoot, since im still not comfortable posing just yet.