Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by cosmonaut, Jan 7, 2007.
Let's try this again. Please judge on Composition and PS skills.
Original thread was fine. Dunno what the other fella was going on about. Might wanna delete one or the other.
I'll try and delete one but if I can't figure it out, I might need some help...
I like the "lonely" feel and the barn. The logs should be part of the shot, but it looks a little busy in this frame.
I like it, I think some info on the barn would help. Is it yours?
I am at work on a 1920pc so to me the color looks great.
No. It's about ten miles away from me. I was tring to catch the uprooted trees with a stormy sky..
Well, in your first post (which I have just deleted) also I only got a red x, even this morning (middle of the night for anyone in the States), so I am glad you started a new thread. In this one I can see your picture all right. Only would I wish it were a little larger for some better viewing.
As to the composition of this photo, it is good. Appealing. If you already worked on it in PS, you might want to go back and quickly clone out those little twigs that come into the frame on the right ... they don't "say" anything but are a bit distracting.
The colour of the sky is ... well, like our sky has been for months now roll: ). Sigh.
But ok, that sky underlines why the image is a bit dark all over.
Does the atmosphere change RADICALLY if you make it just a tad lighter?
This is a nice rural scene.
Composition wise I think it works well, although personally I would crop the sky above the tallest tree - it doesn't add much to the shot.
I think that although the logs are pehaps a little "busy" they still work well, as they are in front of the barn they act as a "draw" to the eye towards the main subject
Very nice (crop the sky though )
I didn't see the original, but this one is a winner!
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