to me there just isnt anything interesting going on in the picture. Maybe try focusing more on the water coming over the damn instead of the pond below
The limited inclusion of grass in the foreground I find a bit distracting. I think the original image is better, but it slopes away to the left. Somehow reshoot ..you mention you can go back there sometime.
Composition is lacking. There is no direction, nothing to settle on. When you go back, look for something you find interesting, and take it in such a way that emphasizes what you see.