The Hut

[Joey]

I haven't got a clue what to title this pic. Should I crop it more?(seems like my favourite question, eh? What about the contrast? A tad too dark? Feel free to comment, pls.

 

[LaFoto]

Your gut feeling ("too dark?") seems to guide you in the right direction with this one, I find it too dark and fairly noisy, too. So dark actually that the blues begin to look artificial, which is a pity in a sky picture such as this one.

And I really don't know what that part of building (?) in the picture IS and what it is supposed to represent and why it is there... ? The message does not reach me with this one, I'm afraid.

 

[Joey]

Hey,the kind of feedback I'm looking for! Appreciate it LaFoto. I want to learn and I need feedbacks like this. It's actually part of the rooftop of a 'gazebo-kind-of-structure'. It was late evening. Should I play with it or should forget it and reshoot? Thanx.

 

[TONYWORKSHOP]

I feel it is OK, but I think the color of the sky is a little bit too blue~, not too real and not enough to be abstract~~

 

[Joey]

LaFoto,I didn't edit this one. Just to give you an idea what it is that's all.

 

[Artemis]

I prefere the second one as I can see more of the hut, nice work bit too dark still though...