The Walk

[Juga]

Good morning everyone. I got LR4 and did a quick edit on a picture I took after work this morning of an older couple taking a walk on the boardwalk. Any C&C is appreciated.

 

[Juga]

Thanks Jedirunner. I appreciate the 'like.'

 

[Juga]

I hate to be one of those people but really...nothing?

 

[sleist]

I like the shot, but I think it might be a bit stronger if you cloned out the person on the left so that there was one, lone, dark silhouette instead of 2 people.

 

[Juga]

I like the shot, but I think it might be a bit stronger if you cloned out the person on the left so that there was one, lone, dark silhouette instead of 2 people.

Thank you! Sometimes it is painful to try and get feedback. I will try it out and post tomorrow.

PS. Your old avatar was much better IMO

 

[Rick50]

The vanishing lines make for good composition. I might try to increase the exposure a tad to lower the gloom feel it seems to have.
And one person would make it more interesting for me too.

 

[Austin Greene]

Composition is good, but honestly it feels flat, most likely because of the fog. Also, just from looking at it, I can't tell its an old couple, so it loses some value for me there in terms of telling a story. Still, a neat shot.

 

[Juga]

Cloned out guy on left.
Cloned out + 'less gloom'

 

[Rick50]

Still a tad flat isn't it. I guess the fog was pretty thick......
The single person helps.

 

[Juga]

The fog was very heavy and condensation started to build up on my lens by the time I finally snapped this shot.

 

[Parker219]

I REALLY like the single person, gloomy version.

Nice work!

 

[Juga]

I personally liked the gloomy version...but I guess I am a bit biased.