Thoughts on this?

[hdukphotographs]

I shot this and edited with photoshop something just seems off to me but i dont know what.Any thoughts?

 

[The_Traveler]

IMO, there are several things that hurt this image:

• the impact of this image is based on symmetry, yet the image itself is not symmetrical. (and looks like there is some barrel distortion)
• second, the sepia tone looks out of place with the content.
• third, the bright spots from the bulbs and much brighter top third and skylight fight with the interesting but dull walls.

 

[sage95]

I disagree with the coment about sepia I think it works well.

 

[TimboAA]

I agree with Traveler about it not being symmetrical. You weren't quite dead center when you took the picture, so the perspective is off.

I think the sepia looks well and fits the vintage aircraft. That or B & W would work well. You might want to try burning in some of the dark corridors and arches just a tad...so we get a hint of detail there, as we don't have any right now. (Just what I would do) If you were burning them in by hand on an enlarger....that would be miserable!

 

[d1a1s1]

You should be able to crop this symmetrical? The problem Im having with this photo is my eyes don't have a place to rest. There's no main subject for the most part so you're drawn to the lightness of the ceiling. Other than that I love the sepia and enjoy the content.