Desi
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These are photos taken in the last few weeks of my friend's family. I've done a fair amount of tweaking in lightroom to get them where I want them. Now I'm hoping you can help me see what I have missed and if there is potential to get more out of these photographs. Thanks.
1. Taken at Mariposa Grove in Yosemite
1/50 f7.1 ISO 800. Semi posed.
DSC_1427.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
2. Inside a burned tree at Mariposa Grove
1/125 f7.1 ISO 800. A candid. She was copying her brother, I had just been taking shots of him. Lots of noise reduction which gives the effect of skin smoothing.
DSC_1461.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
3. Same family in their backyard. Afternoon, shaded. A spontaneous opportunity for a portrait. I can't figure out a white balance that I am happy with. Also, I think the background is too bright. I guess I should have used a wider aperture.
1/60 f6.3 ISO 200 50mm lens.
DSC_0301.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
Thanks for your thoughts.
Desi
1. Taken at Mariposa Grove in Yosemite
1/50 f7.1 ISO 800. Semi posed.
DSC_1427.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
2. Inside a burned tree at Mariposa Grove
1/125 f7.1 ISO 800. A candid. She was copying her brother, I had just been taking shots of him. Lots of noise reduction which gives the effect of skin smoothing.
DSC_1461.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
3. Same family in their backyard. Afternoon, shaded. A spontaneous opportunity for a portrait. I can't figure out a white balance that I am happy with. Also, I think the background is too bright. I guess I should have used a wider aperture.
1/60 f6.3 ISO 200 50mm lens.
DSC_0301.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr
Thanks for your thoughts.
Desi