Too Close!

[PlasticSpanner]

 

[pm63]

A cool idea, but for me the plane being out of focus detracts from it significantly. Also the composition could be more interesting. Try shifting around a little.

But the overall concept is good, and it looks good agains the backdrop of the blue sky. Definitely worth a reshoot.

 

[PlasticSpanner]

Yeah there is a bit of motion blur caused by a slower shutter speed than I needed, due to the small aperture to try to keep the plane & sky in focus.

Although the plane is actually around 40-50 ft away my flash wasn't powerful enough to help either!





i think I will try it again a few times & maybe lose the cloud/sky detail to get the shutter speed up.

 

[Jedo_03]

A cool idea, but for me the plane being out of focus detracts from it significantly. Also the composition could be more interesting. Try shifting around a little.

But the overall concept is good, and it looks good agains the backdrop of the blue sky. Definitely worth a reshoot.

LOL - how long do you have to wait to get a re-shoot of a military jet flying over you at 50 feet..?
Jedo

 

[Antarctican]

Yoiks! I'd be more inclined to 'duck' than to shoot!

 

[Chiller]

Yoiks! I'd be more inclined to 'duck' than to shoot!

My thoughts exactly. NIce one Spanner

 

[nynfortoo]

Pretty cool. I bet that thing was loud!

I don't think I can criticise the composition, given the time-frame you'd be working in to get that shot. I do wish it was properly in focus.