hmm I'd love the shot if the lower part of the bike was a bit visible... I see only dark place alll around and the silhouette of the guy on the bike. But the sky is amazing
i would try to lighten it slightly, but then if you say it looks good on your laptop,i've tried to change the angle of my monitor,and i must say it does appear better, i think it has room for improvement,looks a scary trick, not something i would attempt..