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D40

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Could you please let me know what you think and how I can makes them better:)

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i'd leave the first shot alone, warm up the second and crop it a little tighter.
 
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Thank you so much for the comments, I know I need to work on my cropping but I seem to have a hard time knowing how much to crop. Just something I need to work on:)
 
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How's this:

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By the way, these were taken with the Sigma 70-200 f/2.8. I find it to be a Great portrait lens as far as the focal length:)
 

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The tree in the background annoys me in #1. The photo may have been slightly more on topic to the subject if you took a step to the left and she too a step camera right. Lovely idea though.
 
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Garbz: so basically get an angle without that tree in the background and keep the one on the left? Thanks for the comments!
 

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