its dificult to say something 'constructive' at this one....the background is very dark, all i can see is a white 'thing' at the center...maybe its my monitor?
really mal....!! i think you could do better, i seen better on your comp!! the angle your shooting at doesnt do too much for you. Then again its hard to criticise as im not sure i could do any better!!
No offence, but I think it is your monitor. I've got mine set to display photos exactly as they are on my camera's LCD. Lighten it up a bit and the texture should come out.