Take my comments with a grain of salt because I'm not as seasoned as some here on the boards.
#1 - looks like a snapshot, but I'm sure she family will love it.
#2 - I love the idea of this shot. I like everything about it, except for the fact that the bride is a little bit too distorted for my taste. Neat concept, though. Love the colors.
#3 - Nice pic, bride will enjoy it...wish it would have been composed differently. Landscape instead of portrait would have served this one better, I believe.
#4 - Nice
#5 - I like the idea of something blurred in a foreground like this, but on the left side it's kind of distracting for this particular photo.
#6 - pretty. Straighten it a bit. I feel like the dress should hit the floor, but that's not any fault of yours.
# 7 - Empty space can be good, but I think this one needs a tighter crop and less empty space at the top.
# 8 - Fun! Love it!
# 9 - Nice!
Absolutely love the concept of #2 but again I have to agree the bride is too out of focus for my liking she needs a little more detail. Depth of field a tad too shallow for my liking when it comes to her.